Sun 21 Oct 2007

Soused Mouse by Meg Lyman
9×12 gouache on Bristol
$100 - e-mail to buy
During my humbling “art-reaming” at Dragon*Con, I was given the same advice by several great artists: Tell a Story. Doesn’t matter if it’s an illustration or fine art or just a character pinup - it’ll be much more interesting and successful if it tells a story.
Tommy Castillo gave me a great set of guidelines to help with storytelling. Once you get an idea, ask yourself these questions:
Who? What? When? Where? Why? How?
Sitting down and writing out even quick, one-sentence answers to these helps immensely. The first four are pretty easy; usually you’ll have those answers in mind when you originally have the idea. The last two, however, can be tough. Those are the important ones. They can turn a viewer’s attitude from “So what?” to “Oh, that’s GREAT!”
I have about a zillion doodles in my sketchbook that I intend to turn into paintings. The first project I undertook after Dragon*Con started with this doodle:

Originally, I was going to ink and color him as-is. But after D*C, I answered those questions. I gave him a story. Instead of just an inebriated rodent, he became a drunk sot having trouble making his way back to his apartment after a late night out. The resulting painting was quick and messy, but I love it, because it tells a story. That makes it much more successful.
I highly recommend giving it a try next time you’re arting something from your imagination.
October 21st, 2007 at 9:16
I love this story. keep it up!
October 22nd, 2007 at 6:11
The little puddle of brew under his foot tells the story. I love the subtle colors, and the street light reflecting on his fur. Nice work!
October 22nd, 2007 at 8:26
This is fantastic Meg! I love the expression on his face and his fumbled beer say it all. I had to chuckle when I saw this one, great work!
October 22nd, 2007 at 11:38
Wow! Great storytelling. I’ve actually been thinking about the same thought: telling a story. It seems like all the artists that I admire the most do work that tells stories.
Thanks for the inspiration!
:)
October 23rd, 2007 at 10:55
Very cool!
October 23rd, 2007 at 1:24
Thanks, Casey. I can’t write worth a damn but I love telling stories with pictures. :D
Lisa, thanks. I’m glad you like the lighting. I found it way more fun to colored light than white.
Rita, I’m thrilled to make you laugh. Thanks!
Kasie, thank you. You’re right about those excellent artists, although before I learned this lesson, the fact that they’re such great storytellers never even occurred to me!
October 23rd, 2007 at 1:25
Thanks, Victor!
October 25th, 2007 at 12:11
Well I guess lol the mice that were in my shed must have been drinking cause they all found them selves as trap sandwiches. ;)
Oh and yeah, art that tells stories not to mention a good eye flow, is always good advice.
October 25th, 2007 at 6:28
Tigress, I bet if you left beer out for them they’d pass out on the floor and you wouldn’t need the traps. ;D
You’re right about the eye flow. I find that in progressing my art abilities, I can only work on one thing at a time. Once I get the storytelling down, I’ll work on flow, composition, anatomy, line… the list goes on! Sometimes it seems impossibly daunting…
October 27th, 2007 at 11:20
Now thats what I like. Great job Meg. Great advice those guys gave ya. seems to be working! Don’t worry about the daunting aspect of it all just look at it as a path full of new treats you pick up on the way. Every now and again just look back and you will be amazed.
Again I tip my hat to ya and hoist a fine ale in salute to you.
October 29th, 2007 at 12:40
Thank you, John! Those guys really did give great advice. Sometimes overwhelming, but I’ll store it all for later. :D
Hear, hear!